One of my poems was accepted into an International Poetry Competition today - the result published in May.
Not sure how it will come out here, it's okay in 'Word' but gets temperamental when posted elsewhere.
Boatry
I like
flags.
Do
a Set
fore Sails
sail is Flapping
not for sale In the wind.
you
may find Makes one think
that you need it Of flying
far off like
rather badly in a Some Albatross set free
wind or in a gale From land and those grassy ties
I and without it find
That shore can bring, although I do
do others
quickly up your tail Like being a
landlocked Shipwright it's part
like of
boatbuilding it's my
such a large part of
my life. I love the smell of the wood as I cut and plane it.
Listen to the
music of the parts that go to make a boat, each such poetry:
tumblehome and transom; hog and hogson; apron and the thwart
gutter and garboard strakes of planking: clinker & hard chine
but alas, without a keel,
where would we be?
capsized and upside
down,
swimming
deep beneath
the sea.
Fantastic! Well done on having the patience to write it in that form. Valerie
ReplyDeleteLove it!!!
ReplyDeleteCongrats, John! What a wonderful poem as well as your sense of humour. Best wishes, Sadami
ReplyDeleteSo, so, so very clever, John! No wonder it will be published! Is there no end to your talents? You AMAZE me!
ReplyDeleteIs there nothing you can not do John! You are a brilliant writer and it must've take you ages to lay it out like that! Congratulations! Very well deserved :0)
ReplyDeleteCongratulations John! And well deserved, too!
ReplyDeleteOh my! You must have good nerves doing this! It looks GREAT! You are so creative.Wishing you good luck.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations John...this is wonderful!!!
ReplyDeleteYour creativity knows no bounds!
You are a talented writer~